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Blue/Leaf eats Red (Comic/Short Story) by Artemis-Platinum Blue/Leaf eats Red (Comic/Short Story) by Artemis-Platinum
Warning: Voraphiles may find this sexy. If you're not a voraphile and this somehow /offends/ you despite how non-sexually explicit or graphic it is... (Red is just covered in grossness in the picture, fyi. ;P) you're a silly person and should probably just hit the back button now.

This was gifted to me by an anonymous friend of mine quite a while back and while I loved the original ever so intensely this only provoked me to ask myself "What if it was in color?" (Here's the original: i.imgur.com/s3iIVxI.jpg )

So I got their permission to re-upload a colored version, which is neat because now I get to share this with the world! What you're looking at is a very simple comic depicting the events of one of my other deviations: 
Blue/Leaf eats Red -Animation and Short Story- by Artemis-Platinum

The girl in the lower right is actually an artist's depiction of my OOC alias--Y'know, the one I don't use anymore. Below is the original short story copied directly from the above deviation for convenience. See if you can guess which comic scene aligns to which part of the story.

I will be referring to Blue/Leaf simply as Blue in the story, for simplicity's sake.

(Story)

Blue: *Emitted a light, rather feminine groan in unison with her stomach. She held her rather gravid looking midsection with both hands to help support the weight, bending over slightly with her back to a wall.* ...It looks like I'll be the one traveling to Mt. Silver to seek a true challenge this time, Red~

Red: *Shivers at the feeling of Blue's stomach tightly hugging him from all directions, the steady churning and gentle rubbing of her hands overstimulating his senses and aggravating him.* Nnn... Yeah right--Everyone knows girls are more sensitive to the cold. I bet you... run away. *Shifts and pushes weakly*

Blue: *For a moment, she stopped what she was doing. Well, she honestly couldn't deny the part about girls seeming to be more sensitive to the cold. That seemed to be disturbingly accurate from her appearance. Wonder why that was? ...She briefly looked down at her revealing mini-skirt from the side. ...Perhaps boys just liked to act tough? She wouldn't know.* ...Sure didn't stop me from beating you!~ *Giggles* Yummy in my tummy!~ *Pats her stomach several times*

Red: ...D-Damnit, Blue! *Growled his words out indignantly, not all too thrilled about his situation. One couldn't see the blush on his face, probably having something to do with being intimately squeezed inside a girl.*

Blue: Aww~ *Coos sweetly at her bulging, shifting stomach, taking advantage of her dominant position to get the teasing she normally couldn't do without fear of a pokemon battle done.* What's wooong..? Who's a lil' cutie? Who's a lil---

Red: *Sharply jabs and kicks at the inside of Blue's stomach, cutting her off.* ...

Blue: *Yelps briefly, but quickly regains her composure, not used to having someone squirming around inside her.* ...Someone's being a bad boy. *Shook her head in a condescending manner.

Red: ...What do I look like to you??

Blue: *Looked around for a moment* ...Well, you look just like a /baby/, all snug in my tummy tum, just a little belly bump for all to see~ *Gently began to massage her stomach, even as Red sharply kicked around within every couple of moments.* And for the record, I /am/ going up to Mt. Silver. I won't be alone though--I'll be heavily pregnant with a very rowdy baby, and it'll help keep me warm...~ *Her tone was sultry*

Red: *Stunned into silence by Blue's flirting temporarily.*

Blue: ...

Red: ...

Blue: ...

Red: Blue, you can't keep me in here!

Blue: ...And what are you going to do about it, mister so much better than that /girl/ trainer? What's her name anyway? Green? Leaf? Nobody cares because /she's/ not important! *Crosses her arms under her breasts, genuinely irritated*

Red: Blue, there are /acids/. You've /got/ to spit me back up! And--

Blue: Y'know what? No! I'm /not/ throwing you up! How about that?! I'm just as good a trainer as /you/ are...! *Glared at her stomach for a moment. What, was it the skirt? Was her hair not nice enough?* But it's not like you care! You don't even talk to me unless I hunt you down and /battle/ you first!

Red: *Several long moments of silence aside from the gurgling of Blue's stomach* ...I always thought you were really... cute Blue.

Blue: *Hesitated a moment* ...R-Really? ...I guess I'm not so cute anymore, though~ *She started to pet her stomach*

Red: N-No! You're very cute. And... strong--I don't meet a lot of strong girls, y'know.

Blue: ...*Narrowed her eyes slightly* How cute am I?

Red: ...

Blue: *Narrowed her eyes a bit further* Tell me how much you /love/ being inside me right now~ *Grinned, tightening her body a bit*

Red: B--Blue! I--...

Blue: Do it! Unless I'm not pretty enough to be inside~

Red: *Grumbled, his grumbles drowned out by Blue's stomach noises.* It's... amazing.

Blue: Are you sure? You don't sound convinced... Is it /hot/?~ *Grinned, her tone sultry. She slowly ran her hands down the side of her body in a flirtatious manner.

Red: ...Nnn... there's no body I'd rather be inside. *His tone lacked conviction.*

Blue: Hmph. *Giggles immaturely at having convinced Red to pretend to enjoy beign in her stomach.* I don't believe you. If you want to get out, you can get out on your /own/!

Red: *A moment's hesitation. Well... actually, he had no problem with that! Red kicks harder, squirming in such a manner as to try and force his way out. However, Blue's stomach merely stretched with his blows, keeping him safely within her gut.*

Blue: Mmm... That /almost/ hurt~ 

Red: ...*Red regained his sense of direction, finding the top of Blue's stomach and pushing himself up. He managed to get back into her throat, but soon found that something was wrapped tightly around her chest, restraining his access further up.*

Blue: *Felt Red move further up and became wary, wincing slightly as she felt his bulging form bump into her chest* ...I guess you didn't expect me to put my bra back on after eating you, huh?~

Red: This is humiliating...

Blue: *Giggles lightly* Why's that? Didn't think a /girl/ could do something like this? It's not like you to underestimate people, Red...~

Red: ... *Tried to force himself through, only to find that her chest was too tight. He only managed to get his head and an arm up into her chest before he could go no further, pushing his arm back out of Blue's mouth and attempting to grab for something to help pull himself up.*

Blue: Mmph!... *Hesitates a moment at the admittedly gross taste of Red's re-emerged arm. She quickly proceeds to swallow him back down though, prodding her stomach rather hard* If you were looking for an escape you came to the wrong end, buddy..~ *Grins in a mocking manner*

Red: *Kicks and shoves around as hard as he can*

Blue: *Swayed her hips in a flirtatious manner along with Red's struggling, gently rubbing her stomach* Don't worry~ You'll live...

Red: ..! *A rather intense blush caught his cheeks*

(End)
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:iconghostofpinbot6:
I would just like to say that your work is marvelous. I really thought that the story that went with the comic complemented perfectly, loved the coloring of the characters, enjoyed the vore moment, the characters were cute and relatable, it was a straight-forward comic, and the coloring of the acids were magnificent. However, there were some drawbacks with the comic. I am not saying that your art work is bad, not at all. I am just saying It could use such improvements such as, a realistic background, comic-strip panels, a little more shading on Blue's hair, and a floor in which Blue can stand on. Otherwise, I loved the work and you should keep doing work like this. Rating: Very good.
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:iconbearce:
Hi there. My name is Bearce and I just wanted to say that your artwork on this young woman is absolutely incredible. It is by far one of the best drawings of art I have ever seen. I love the way her stomach is stuffed like that and it's perfect. I also love the way her throat bulges when she gulps the hand down and it kinda reminds me of Lindsay from Total Drama season 1 on the episode "The Sucky Outdoors" when she gulps nervously and a lump on her neck appears when she does that. I even like that face of hers and... I think if she was real, it would be love at first sight for me. Keep up the good work and make more throat bulges for me. See you later?
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:iconredtrainerpkmn:
RedTrainerPKMN Featured By Owner Edited Aug 19, 2015  New Deviant
D: xDDDD
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Comfy?~
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:iconredtrainerpkmn:
RedTrainerPKMN Featured By Owner Edited Aug 20, 2015  New Deviant
good story but leaf / blue really eats me XD
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps if you were a Psychic you would've foreseen the consequences of underestimating your girl counterpart~
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:iconredtrainerpkmn:
RedTrainerPKMN Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant
yes ¬¬
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  New Deviant
how does she fit red in her mouth anyway
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I bet he was asking the same thing as he got intimately familiar with her tongue~
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  New Deviant
wait what happened yo red after the story
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Probably not anything too dignified. ;P
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  New Deviant
well are red and blue in love or was that a coy to distract blue or leaf or idk
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Doesn't seem like it! Then again...
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  New Deviant
welp i got my last questions kbye c u prob in another comic or animation * hapoy mask salesman laugh*
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  New Deviant
so its a distraction then :\
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  New Deviant
i think ok i got nothing your thoughts
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:iconsupertombrother:
SuperTomBrother Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
her name is green not blue. gary is blue.
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:iconjaeybird9:
jaeybird9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  New Deviant
u ruin everything
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Get out.
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:iconjoe9go:
joe9go Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  New Deviant
ok, so i traveled back in time to give red anti-digestion spray, to keep red alive... what if red and blue were to work together like this? blue could throw up reds pokeballs?
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think Blue is a fan of puking, if you catch my drift~

Red can certainly stay and chat though! It's not as if he has anything better to do, at least until her metabolism picks him up~
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:iconjoe9go:
joe9go Featured By Owner Edited Jun 17, 2015  New Deviant
its a good thing i gave red that can of INSTASNOT anti-digestion spray! so heres the idea that anythiNeverythin corperation thought of is, well because the stomach has a mucus layer to stop it from digesting itself. so they said "hey! why not make a spray that makes your pores temperarly produce a mucus layer to protect them if they get eaten by who knows what?"   the company has been making godmodding products ever since.
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
That's actually more gross than digestion.
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:iconjoe9go:
joe9go Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  New Deviant
kinda why i switched to acid resistant clothing.
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:iconcutelittlekittydude:
CuteLittleKittydude Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015
What, is this. I am scared now. ;-;

BUMPER CARZ : BUMPER CARZ WILL SAVE THE DAY, I'M GOING TO RAM INTO YOUR STOMACH MS. BECAUSE I HAVE A BUMPER CAR. :3
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
That doesn't sound safe, though that cushy belly would help cushion the blow~
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:iconcutelittlekittydude:
CuteLittleKittydude Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
BUMPER CARZ : *Starts up car* VROOM VROOM, I'M HERE TO SAVE YOU RED WITH ME BUMPER CAR. WOOOOOOOOOO. YOU WILL BE BUMPER CARED BLUE/GREEN GIRL. MUHHAHAHHAHHA

WHO'S A CUTE WIDDLE PIRATE FOX? (Chat Icon) : Good work me laddy!
Swag-trap the pimp-daddy : PLEASE DON'T START THIS AGAIN.
Springtrap is Watching You (Chat Icon) : Hey Rekspringtrap, I'm out...
Swag-trap the pimp-daddy : WHAT? I THOUGHT YOU WERE REKD STRAIGHT?
SpringTrap's Game Face : REKSPRINGTRAP! WHY ARE WE HERE WITH VOMITING GIRLS?
Swag-trap the pimp-daddy : I have no idea brother Ventspringtrap...
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner May 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I activate my trap card, the firmly strapped bra! Looks like things are getting real tight in the chest area and Red won't be going anywhere.

A little girl power saves the day ;o
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:iconcutelittlekittydude:
CuteLittleKittydude Featured By Owner May 10, 2015
ACTIVATE RANDOM CAT CARD, SHERBERT


*All cards in play will now jump higher.

Pink Knight : I WILL HIT A BLUE LEAF WITH A LOLLIPOP. YESSS


Lazeswirl : I ues spiral. All enemies are confused.
Rainbow Dash (angry) #2 plz 
Pearl Emote 25 : WHAT.
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:iconcutelittlekittydude:
CuteLittleKittydude Featured By Owner May 26, 2015
Pearl Emote 11 : WHAT? WHAT IS A BRA???
Pearl freaking out again .. : I'M FREAKING OUT....
Garnet Emote 2 : Pearl, your overreacting...
Pearl Emote 4 : I'M NOT OVERREACTING!!! *Stars running around like a banchee
Steven Universe Lapis Lazuli (Hand Of Water) : I AM GOING TO SLAP A LEAF WITH A TSUNAMI...
Peridot Icon 3 : *gasp*
Peridot Icon 2 :Lapis! What are you DOING?
Steven Universe Lapis Lazuli (It's Lapis) : I'm doing what's best.
Peridot Icon 1 :Mhm.....
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:iconjoe9go:
joe9go Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  New Deviant
carrying on the trend of doing something destructive to leaf to "save" red, i will summon giant tetris bblocks to rain down from the skys! 
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joe9go Featured By Owner Edited Jun 17, 2015  New Deviant
:D jk
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:iconpocketplanesairways:
PocketPlanesAirways Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm quite sure there's a medication to stop digestion, or some sort of drug to neutralize stomach acid, but the question is the oxygen. Swallow lots of air leaf!
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:iconjoe9go:
joe9go Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  New Deviant
the stomach secrets a layer of mucus to prevent the stomach from digesting itself... maybe you can start with that. ITS SCIENCE! :D science! 
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You might be surprised at how long you could survive inside a stomach, even without either of those things~
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:iconpocketplanesairways:
PocketPlanesAirways Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Baht pain. And blindness. And bleaching of the skin. Oh the horrors. I'd like vote if it was painless, you weren't digested, and you made it out alive. But I think my claustrophobia would get to me.
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:iconcoolalucaz:
coolalucaz Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Student Filmographer
from the pic  :iconartemis-platinum:
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Sithious1 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
Mhmf wow I just love seeing vore pics where the prey stuggles their arms or head back up and the pred gulps them back down, very rare and amazing thing to find. <33~
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure to deliver~ I too enjoy when the prey puts up a bit more of a fight~
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:iconpocketplanesairways:
PocketPlanesAirways Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I could think of a better way to fight back, claw away the mucous and burn their insides until they give up and spit you out.
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Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I believe you would find that your mucous covered hands and the very tight, restraining walls would make this a monumentally difficult task. vwv
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:iconpocketplanesairways:
PocketPlanesAirways Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Then again, if I'm covered in mucous, wouldn't I be impervious to digestion?
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It would take a long time, no doubt. vwv
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:iconpocketplanesairways:
PocketPlanesAirways Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Long enough to formulate a way out.
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps! Though you would find it would likely not be the way you want~
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:iconfox-huner13:
fox-huner13 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
I think u should do another one of theses
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As of yesterday actually I'm beginning to plan a remake of this. It's quite a long way's off, but it's an idea.
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:iconfox-huner13:
fox-huner13 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
Cool
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:iconinternetexplorer968:
Internetexplorer968 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Although I rarely see human vore, the person who made it did a great job, they have a knack for squirms. I respect your tastes (LOL, pun not intended XD), I don't know why the people in the comments continue to say it's gross when they comment regardless. I think I'll try human vore, just for fun.
I like the faces in the comic. And how you make a decent story in the description. :D
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Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think all that tummy slime might be why they say it's gross~

In truth though it's not much different from the stuff that comes out of your nose. Personally I enjoy it because, I'unno, I could think of much grosser and it feels -real- to me y'know?

But thank you. I hope you have fun with it.
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