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Blue/Leaf eats Red (Comic/Short Story) by Artemis-Platinum Blue/Leaf eats Red (Comic/Short Story) by Artemis-Platinum
Warning: Voraphiles may find this sexy. If you're not a voraphile and this somehow /offends/ you despite how non-sexually explicit or graphic it is... (Red is just covered in grossness in the picture, fyi. ;P) you're a silly person and should probably just hit the back button now.

This was gifted to me by an anonymous friend of mine quite a while back and while I loved the original ever so intensely this only provoked me to ask myself "What if it was in color?" (Here's the original: i.imgur.com/s3iIVxI.jpg )

So I got their permission to re-upload a colored version, which is neat because now I get to share this with the world! What you're looking at is a very simple comic depicting the events of one of my other deviations: 
Blue/Leaf eats Red -Animation and Short Story- by Artemis-Platinum

The girl in the lower right is actually an artist's depiction of my OOC alias--Y'know, the one I almost never use. Below is the original short story copied directly from the above deviation for convenience. See if you can guess which comic scene aligns to which part of the story.

I will be referring to Blue/Leaf simply as Blue in the story, for simplicity's sake.

(Story)

Blue: *Emitted a light, rather feminine groan in unison with her stomach. She held her rather gravid looking midsection with both hands to help support the weight, bending over slightly with her back to a wall.* ...It looks like I'll be the one traveling to Mt. Silver to seek a true challenge this time, Red~

Red: *Shivers at the feeling of Blue's stomach tightly hugging him from all directions, the steady churning and gentle rubbing of her hands overstimulating his senses and aggravating him.* Nnn... Yeah right--Everyone knows girls are more sensitive to the cold. I bet you... run away. *Shifts and pushes weakly*

Blue: *For a moment, she stopped what she was doing. Well, she honestly couldn't deny the part about girls seeming to be more sensitive to the cold. That seemed to be disturbingly accurate from her appearance. Wonder why that was? ...She briefly looked down at her revealing mini-skirt from the side. ...Perhaps boys just liked to act tough? She wouldn't know.* ...Sure didn't stop me from beating you!~ *Giggles* Yummy in my tummy!~ *Pats her stomach several times*

Red: ...D-Damnit, Blue! *Growled his words out indignantly, not all too thrilled about his situation. One couldn't see the blush on his face, probably having something to do with being intimately squeezed inside a girl.*

Blue: Aww~ *Coos sweetly at her bulging, shifting stomach, taking advantage of her dominant position to get the teasing she normally couldn't do without fear of a pokemon battle done.* What's wooong..? Who's a lil' cutie? Who's a lil---

Red: *Sharply jabs and kicks at the inside of Blue's stomach, cutting her off.* ...

Blue: *Yelps briefly, but quickly regains her composure, not used to having someone squirming around inside her.* ...Someone's being a bad boy. *Shook her head in a condescending manner.

Red: ...What do I look like to you??

Blue: *Looked around for a moment* ...Well, you look just like a /baby/, all snug in my tummy tum, just a little belly bump for all to see~ *Gently began to massage her stomach, even as Red sharply kicked around within every couple of moments.* And for the record, I /am/ going up to Mt. Silver. I won't be alone though--I'll be heavily pregnant with a very rowdy baby, and it'll help keep me warm...~ *Her tone was sultry*

Red: *Stunned into silence by Blue's flirting temporarily.*

Blue: ...

Red: ...

Blue: ...

Red: Blue, you can't keep me in here!

Blue: ...And what are you going to do about it, mister so much better than that /girl/ trainer? What's her name anyway? Green? Leaf? Nobody cares because /she's/ not important! *Crosses her arms under her breasts, genuinely irritated*

Red: Blue, there are /acids/. You've /got/ to spit me back up! And--

Blue: Y'know what? No! I'm /not/ throwing you up! How about that?! I'm just as good a trainer as /you/ are...! *Glared at her stomach for a moment. What, was it the skirt? Was her hair not nice enough?* But it's not like you care! You don't even talk to me unless I hunt you down and /battle/ you first!

Red: *Several long moments of silence aside from the gurgling of Blue's stomach* ...I always thought you were really... cute Blue.

Blue: *Hesitated a moment* ...R-Really? ...I guess I'm not so cute anymore, though~ *She started to pet her stomach*

Red: N-No! You're very cute. And... strong--I don't meet a lot of strong girls, y'know.

Blue: ...*Narrowed her eyes slightly* How cute am I?

Red: ...

Blue: *Narrowed her eyes a bit further* Tell me how much you /love/ being inside me right now~ *Grinned, tightening her body a bit*

Red: B--Blue! I--...

Blue: Do it! Unless I'm not pretty enough to be inside~

Red: *Grumbled, his grumbles drowned out by Blue's stomach noises.* It's... amazing.

Blue: Are you sure? You don't sound convinced... Is it /hot/?~ *Grinned, her tone sultry. She slowly ran her hands down the side of her body in a flirtatious manner.

Red: ...Nnn... there's no body I'd rather be inside. *His tone lacked conviction.*

Blue: Hmph. *Giggles immaturely at having convinced Red to pretend to enjoy beign in her stomach.* I don't believe you. If you want to get out, you can get out on your /own/!

Red: *A moment's hesitation. Well... actually, he had no problem with that! Red kicks harder, squirming in such a manner as to try and force his way out. However, Blue's stomach merely stretched with his blows, keeping him safely within her gut.*

Blue: Mmm... That /almost/ hurt~ 

Red: ...*Red regained his sense of direction, finding the top of Blue's stomach and pushing himself up. He managed to get back into her throat, but soon found that something was wrapped tightly around her chest, restraining his access further up.*

Blue: *Felt Red move further up and became wary, wincing slightly as she felt his bulging form bump into her chest* ...I guess you didn't expect me to put my bra back on after eating you, huh?~

Red: This is humiliating...

Blue: *Giggles lightly* Why's that? Didn't think a /girl/ could do something like this? It's not like you to underestimate people, Red...~

Red: ... *Tried to force himself through, only to find that her chest was too tight. He only managed to get his head and an arm up into her chest before he could go no further, pushing his arm back out of Blue's mouth and attempting to grab for something to help pull himself up.*

Blue: Mmph!... *Hesitates a moment at the admittedly gross taste of Red's re-emerged arm. She quickly proceeds to swallow him back down though, prodding her stomach rather hard* If you were looking for an escape you came to the wrong end, buddy..~ *Grins in a mocking manner*

Red: *Kicks and shoves around as hard as he can*

Blue: *Swayed her hips in a flirtatious manner along with Red's struggling, gently rubbing her stomach* Don't worry~ You'll live...

Red: ..! *A rather intense blush caught his cheeks*

(End)
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I would just like to say that your work is marvelous. I really thought that the story that went with the comic complemented perfectly, loved the coloring of the characters, enjoyed the vore moment, the characters were cute and relatable, it was a straight-forward comic, and the coloring of the acids were magnificent. However, there were some drawbacks with the comic. I am not saying that your art work is bad, not at all. I am just saying It could use such improvements such as, a realistic background, comic-strip panels, a little more shading on Blue's hair, and a floor in which Blue can stand on. Otherwise, I loved the work and you should keep doing work like this. Rating: Very good.
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Hi there. My name is Bearce and I just wanted to say that your artwork on this young woman is absolutely incredible. It is by far one of the best drawings of art I have ever seen. I love the way her stomach is stuffed like that and it's perfect. I also love the way her throat bulges when she gulps the hand down and it kinda reminds me of Lindsay from Total Drama season 1 on the episode "The Sucky Outdoors" when she gulps nervously and a lump on her neck appears when she does that. I even like that face of hers and... I think if she was real, it would be love at first sight for me. Keep up the good work and make more throat bulges for me. See you later?
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Anoniimoose Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Almost a little dissapointed that Red doesn't go gurgle in the end~

Still, very sexy story and pics!
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smithjones2499 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
in the picture was she nervous that he might get out through her belly? because she looked afraid when he kicked or pushed really hard on her belly. i mean how it looks on the picture.
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Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think she was more startled and perhaps irritated with how it felt~ It's really hard to kick when you're squeezed into a tight little ball in a cute lady's tummy, but if you can manage to pull back enough to get a good little kick in it can leave them quite sore!
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smithjones2499 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
ill bet it would leave them sore
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CosmicGrounds Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Writer
If she is an adult, I will find this sexy, but if she is not I will find it disgusting (I don't mix children with fetish, it's against my personal morales). 

Other than that, I love it when prey fights against the predator after being eaten only to go back down. A bonus if they escape and run for their lives, just getting only several feet from help, only to be eaten again. 
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Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm afraid it's unethical to mix fantasy with reality in the context of vore; That's a big no no in the vore community and I'll have to insist that she is not real and has no age. While I understand it can be difficult to keep fiction and reality separate for some it's entirely unfair to others to hold moral discussions in the comments, so I'll also have to ask you to take this to a private note if you wish to continue.

On an entirely unrelated note, I too very much enjoy when prey aren't portrayed as helpless.
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CosmicGrounds Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Since it's your account and space, I understand. It's just with all the vore and children mixed together by other users a red flag rises. No hard feelings of course. 
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ASFCruppy Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
lol vore
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Hatsworthington Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
I'm really glad to see a story where the pred actually has some issues when trying to contain the prey. Most tales will just have the pred swallow the character and have some sort of magical bodily function keep them inside, but this one makes the pred work for their meal. Glad to see a story that shows that the struggle still continues even after the prey is caught.
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Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mmm... I've never been a fan of casual vore! Making it slightly difficult to keep the prey down is a convenient method of avoiding that altogether.
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