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Dawn eats May -Animation and Short Story- by Artemis-Platinum Dawn eats May -Animation and Short Story- by Artemis-Platinum
Warning: Voraphiles may find this sexy. If you're not a voraphile and this somehow /offends/ you despite how non-sexually explicit or graphic it is... You're a silly person and should probably just hit the back button now.

So I got permission to tinker with an old piece of work by :iconraging-banebou: and I hopped on the offer. This is an edited version of his work "Dawn Vored May", pictued here:



I had some fun with GIMP's iWarp tool to try and make it animated. I know I'm not the best artist--I could never have made this from scratch--But I feel like perhaps some people might enjoy this! Dawn/Platina is one of my favorite pokemon girls, so I really enjoyed this myself. Read below for a story script. Ooor just use your imagination~



(Story)

Dawn: *Meek burp* ...Excuse me!~ Who am I apologizing to anyway?~

May: ...I'm still here Dawn!! G-Gross...

Dawn: *Giggles* Who said that? *Looks around, twisting her body a bit to sway her stomach back and fourth gently* I only see me here, and my full tummy... Oh, wait! Now I remember! *She grins teasingly* I ate May! *Prods her stomach hard.

May: S-Shut up..! *Punches at the inside of Dawn's stomach, only to find it's too tight for her to put her full strength behind it.* Let me out, Dawn--It's... really gross in here..!

Dawn: *The gurgling of her stomach drowns out the last part of May's words* What's that?~ I couldn't hear you~

May: I--...It's slimy and dark and gross in here Dawn! Let me out right now..!

Dawn: *She placed both her hands on her stomach* Why would I do that?~

May: I'm not food, nnn...

Dawn: *Giggles lightly, her laughter causing her stomach to bounce gently.* You aren't? Coulda fooled me!~ Maybe you're my /baby/ then~ *She once again prodded her stomach rather hard*

May: ...*A meek, rather humiliated whine was heard, heavily muffled*

Dawn: *Snickers and shakes her head* Poooor baby~ Don't you worry, momma's here.

May: *Jabbed against the inside of Dawn's stomach* Knock it off and spit me up! These acids are irritating my skin!!

Dawn: *Made a small mock gasp* Y-You think I'm going to throw you up?? It was hard enough getting you down! It would take forever to get you back up, and there's no way I'm tasting that...~

May: But... Dawn... I need to get out!

Dawn: You will!~ After 9 months... or a few hours. I'm not sure how fast my metabolism is... *She grinned*

May: ...I-I'm not coming out that way, Dawn!

Dawn: *Smirks* What way?

May: ...Y-Your butt!... _

Dawn: *Giggles in an immature manner* What about my butt?~

May: D-Dawn, knock it off! Stop... laughing! It feels like an earthquake in here, and there's no way I'm getting out that end, okay?!

Dawn: Sorry May, but it's kind of the only way... You'll be my butt baby!~ *Gives her stomach a light hug and begins to soothingly rub it*

May: *Muffled sounds of digestion and speech are heard, before she gasps and her voice clears up* No Dawn!

*May begins to kick and struggle, trying to force her way up Dawn's throat only to be swallowed down. Dawn's face twists into one of mild pleasure rather than pain, a nice subtle blush spreading across her cheeks*

Dawn: O-Oh... Maybe I should try this with Ash sometime~ Or maybe Paul... _

(End)
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:iconnoobrat:
I suggest you first make two versions of the base image: one containing the parts you want to move. (make sure that this one has a transparent background.) And the other the parts you want to stay still. You then animate the moving parts the way you want them to. Then you take the still image copy the image into layers until you have the same number of layers as the animated one. And then you paste the layers of the animated image onto the layers of the still image. This way you prevent the parts that you don't want to move from getting affected by the morping effect.
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:icondejectedravenhawk122:
dejectedravenhawk122 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
this makes me harder than a fossilised raven

raven out
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:iconthousandmilehorizon:
ThousandMileHorizon Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice work! ^^
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:icondawnandmayforever:
dawnandmayforever Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
OMG! I love this so much. If I could I would fave it 100 times. I hope you do more, I love Dawn vore of any kind.
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would absolutely do more of these, but my scratch-work is even worse than this, methinks. Maybe. I don't know. I don't dabble in graphic art enough to properly judge my own work.

Perhaps another artist will come along and ask me to fix up their stuff. I could absolutely do a better job than this with my editing abilities. In hindsight, I probably should've tried to shade this, and after recieving Noobrat's critique I could probably get rid of thewarping of Dawn's skirt. (The warping of one of her hands was intentional. It's supposed to simulate rubbing. |D)

Ooor perhaps I'll find some time to burn and throw myself at trying to scratch something. Either way, I recommend you watch me so that you see what I put up whenever it's finished!~
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:icondawnandmayforever:
dawnandmayforever Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
I see. I still really love this piece. I especially love when her throat bulges and her expression changes from swallowing something to smiling. It's great.
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. <3 I had to imagine that having May try to force her way back up only to be swallowed back down would give Dawn a slightly smug look on her face--So~

I guess I must've made your day, judging by your name. :P I wonder if there are any other pairings you'd like to see in terms of lovely pokegirls eating people?~
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:icondawnandmayforever:
dawnandmayforever Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
I loved the smug look on Dawn's face. It was so good. It went perfectly with all her belly bulges moving around. Love it so much, I hope to see more!

As for other pairings, hmm. Lyra and Hilda would probably be next on the list to see them with giant bellies. Who they would swallow, I wouldn't know. Also have you seen that new blonde trainer from the new Pokemon game trailers? Her design looks really cute. When official artwork of her comes out I can't wait to see who does belly artwork with her.
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm currently in the process of making a new, even better vore animation~<3 It should be uploaded soon.
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:icontartoon-man94:
TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Yeah that smug look Is a nice touch! I wanted to say that too!
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:P I couldn't resist editing her facial features a bit to reflect what was going on. I'm currently writing the story to go along with my new animation. It's 2.3 MB, 339 frames of weirdness.
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:icontartoon-man94:
TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Hey this isn't half bad :)
It's not even a quarter bad, not bad at all, this is good! :D
Very clever use of the warp tool :thumbsup: 'really brings the whole scene to life
(you even added the thin legs like you commented about

And the story that goes with it, a thick layer of icing on the cake :lick: it adds a scene for the animation to give life to!
You should do more of these with more drawings!
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aye. The warp tool part was mostly trial and error, figuring out how to chain multiple warps into one animation and making each of those warps look nice took a few hours. The editing of the legs was crazy easy though. You may have noticed, but raging-banebou's lineart is extremely clean. It's not like traditional art where the lines are fuzzy or anything like that, so that part was just making sure the legs didn't look anatomically painful and editing the skirt to reflect their new width.

I also edited and thinned out the arms slightly, changing their anatomy a bit.

I would love to do more of these. I'm just afraid that my lineart itself isn't up to par and that I won't really get another chance to edit someone else's work in the near future. As I said to dawnandmayforever, perhaps I'll throw myself at making a scratch piece later.
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:icontartoon-man94:
TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Well I'm sure anyone who's seen this would be more than willing to let you make one of thier work :D
I would,...if I had any ^^;
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You make a good point. I'm sure there's someone else out there who might appreciate some collaborative art. Alas, I'm not in-the-know about that sort of thing. I'm also currently very frustrated with some of the backwards-ass elitism present on DeviantArt.
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:icontartoon-man94:
TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Backwards elitism? what do you mean?
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I could try and explain only with words, but I think there's a better way. Here's some context in the form of a photolog of a conversation that took place after a group declined this very deviation.

[link]

The ultimate sum of what's wrong with this picture is that a /good/ group admin should be happy when their group members attempt to improve perceived flaws with a group, or at the very least be receptive enough to discuss them in a civilized manner. The one part of the picture that is highly relevant is when Metalforever says that a majority vote decided that there needed to be quality standards in the group.

These 'quality standards' ban collaborative art in general, and shun less skilled artists from participating in the group rather than forming legitimate initiatives to try and help those artists grow.

If such obscene standards can get a majority vote behind them, that indicates a problem with the community that I'm legitimately afraid to challenge.
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:icontartoon-man94:
TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Alas, as long as there shall be rules, there shall be rules that suck :ohmygod:

But y'know, who needs Metalforever anyway? You Should make your own dA group where Everyone's welcome! :idea:
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I guess. If we had DA staff that... y'know... actively worked to improve the community we could probably avoid some of this ignorance though. But y'know that feeling--That feeling when someone you admire from afar turns out to be a bit of a royal jerk? That sucks. -_-

Anyway. You're right. I probably should. Really the only question is whether I have the time for it.

A part of me wants to make an endosomatophilia group--For those of us with tastes more inclined to that side of things. Another part of me knows that making an endosomatophilia pokegirls group would be a bit specific, and would likely hinder the group's ability to take off though.

Even making it just pokegirls vore might be a bit specific.

...Or perhaps people /appreciate/ specific? I have no clue what I'm doing. :U
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Mangavore Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
I enjoyed this. Dawn's my all time fave girl.
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:iconartemis-platinum:
Artemis-Platinum Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear it~ If I wasn't awful at making stuff from scratch, I'd probably publish stuff more often. Editing like this is the best I can do. |D
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Mangavore Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
I still enjoyed this very much. It's Dawn vore so how could I not XD
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